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Coleen
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So she’s convinced him to make a large
donation to feed the homeless but she’s hasn’t told him he’s a father and gotten herself out of the possibility of being homeless herself? The heroine is not as intelligent as the author wants to portray.
Also, the timeline needs some work. She’s having sex 3 weeks after giving birth and having a torn perineum? 😒
— Feb 26, 2019 12:42AM
donation to feed the homeless but she’s hasn’t told him he’s a father and gotten herself out of the possibility of being homeless herself? The heroine is not as intelligent as the author wants to portray.
Also, the timeline needs some work. She’s having sex 3 weeks after giving birth and having a torn perineum? 😒
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Coleen
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First read by this author.
This is on of my favorite tropes so I’m hoping it blows me away.
So far wondering if there are cell phones since it seems the heroine needs video proof of her being harassed at work. 🤬
— Feb 24, 2019 01:52PM
This is on of my favorite tropes so I’m hoping it blows me away.
So far wondering if there are cell phones since it seems the heroine needs video proof of her being harassed at work. 🤬
