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of 256 (or so my Nook e-book says)
lots of wtt trends already (green eyed MC, strand, hair tuck, smirk) and a few words not used correctly, it seems. contrite for example
— Mar 04, 2019 12:23PM
lots of wtt trends already (green eyed MC, strand, hair tuck, smirk) and a few words not used correctly, it seems. contrite for example
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Nancy Brady
is on page 200 of 406
of 256
over-exaggeration of every description is getting to me. Slightly is overused as well, sometimes even negating the emotional as in "I gave him a big smile slightly" although that one is made up.
— Mar 08, 2019 10:56AM
over-exaggeration of every description is getting to me. Slightly is overused as well, sometimes even negating the emotional as in "I gave him a big smile slightly" although that one is made up.
Nancy Brady
is on page 168 of 406
of 256 (Nook edition)
lots of wrong words used. a couple of examples...the word errand for errant, too for to...to name a few. an extra pair of eyes would have corrected this.
the characters and situations are way over the top. word usage is too.
— Mar 07, 2019 12:51PM
lots of wrong words used. a couple of examples...the word errand for errant, too for to...to name a few. an extra pair of eyes would have corrected this.
the characters and situations are way over the top. word usage is too.

