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over-exaggeration of every description is getting to me. Slightly is overused as well, sometimes even negating the emotional as in "I gave him a big smile slightly" although that one is made up.
— Mar 08, 2019 10:56AM
over-exaggeration of every description is getting to me. Slightly is overused as well, sometimes even negating the emotional as in "I gave him a big smile slightly" although that one is made up.
Nancy Brady
is on page 168 of 406
of 256 (Nook edition)
lots of wrong words used. a couple of examples...the word errand for errant, too for to...to name a few. an extra pair of eyes would have corrected this.
the characters and situations are way over the top. word usage is too.
— Mar 07, 2019 12:51PM
lots of wrong words used. a couple of examples...the word errand for errant, too for to...to name a few. an extra pair of eyes would have corrected this.
the characters and situations are way over the top. word usage is too.
Nancy Brady
is on page 94 of 406
of 256 (or so my Nook e-book says)
lots of wtt trends already (green eyed MC, strand, hair tuck, smirk) and a few words not used correctly, it seems. contrite for example
— Mar 04, 2019 12:23PM
lots of wtt trends already (green eyed MC, strand, hair tuck, smirk) and a few words not used correctly, it seems. contrite for example
