Scarletine’s Reviews > Five Minutes Longer > Status Update

I'm not too impressed with the writing. There is a lot of unnecessary description "He blinked, shrugged his shoulders, blinked again and took in a deep breath. He breathed deeply and then let it out slowly" That kind of stuff.
Also, we are at Talon's apartment for the 2nd time and it is written like its the 1st time there. He suddenly has a dog and there is no mention that the characters have been there before??