Jilrene’s Reviews > Heartlands > Status Update
Jilrene
is 51% done
I'm struggling to keep reading. Too many characters who keep doing things that make no sense because I don't have all the information. The head hopping is getting on my nerves. Especially when we hop just as a big reveal is about to happen. The flashbacks don't fit, either. Why are they happening?
— Mar 28, 2019 06:37PM
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Jilrene
is 12% done
Lots of characters introduced in the first couple chapters. And flashbacks that don't connect to anyone yet.
— Mar 24, 2019 12:36PM
