❂ Endless’s Reviews > Evenfall > Status Update

So...Boyd just went bonkers and I feel that Vivienne is actually his stepmother 'cos no mother could be this heartless and blind...It's too extreme to be believable...

Hsin's being an ass and the author just rudely took me out of the universe of the book by making a 19yr old boy talk like a book! 19yr old kids don't talk in such flowery language. It's one of my pet peeves with romance writers. Oh and say hello to-how-I-see-Boyd Boyd.

mmm...I'm finding some of the writing and dialogs terribly naive...People don't talk like the flowery language that some writers are prone to writing...It irks me...just little. Only the intriguing characters are keeping me from cnf-ing this book.