Elizabeth’s Reviews > A Curse So Dark and Lonely > Status Update

I want to love this. I love the characters. I love the premise and the plot.

But the language is driving me nuts. All of the head-hopping is hard to keep up with, but the prince uses almost no contractions. Everything is "I will" and "You could not" and it reads kind of stilted and throws me right out of the story.

I still really like it, but....argh.