Jenny’s Reviews > Passion Unleashed > Status Update

I'm halfway done and assume this is self published. It is stiff, and the author switches view points too often. She needs an editor who knows grammar (and can conjugate lie/lay) and who knows where to rewrite and revise. It feels like this author will be great one day, but she needs more classes and/or a solid writer's group who aren't afraid to tell. Her what to rip apart, dump, and keep. I hope she keeps going.