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Lillian Francis
Lillian Francis is 60% done
Just checked and this is self published and a new author (as far as I can tell). This is a perfect example of why I recommend new authors go with a publisher first. It's a good idea but needs a lot of content editing to tighten it up and get it back on track.
And if you're going to have an arsehole for your MC balance him out with the other characters POV and for God's sake give him a redemption arc.
May 30, 2019 10:27PM
Matchmaking Beyond the Veil (Telltale Ghosts, #1)


Lillian Francis
Lillian Francis is 30% done
Emery is a hard character to like.
May 29, 2019 12:31PM
Matchmaking Beyond the Veil (Telltale Ghosts, #1)


Lillian Francis
Lillian Francis is 15% done
Hmmm, I have no idea what is going on.
May 29, 2019 06:28AM
Matchmaking Beyond the Veil (Telltale Ghosts, #1)


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