Elithanathile’s Reviews > Sins of Omission > Status Update

// I'm doing Ari's signature move and I'm rolling MY eyes now >:-o!! Who's to say Ari won't be obnoxious again?!? I don't trust him ... not one bit!! Also, what an entitled little shit ... after all his theatrics, HE expects Eli to come to HIM?!!? I wish Eli just told Ari to fuck off and disappear!!!!!

// The fact that he says "Shibari shit" ... that's like a spit in the face of someone who loves it! I am angry at this author for creating a nasty character who destroyed this book, and for punishing an absolutely magnificent MC like Eli by pairing him with someone obnoxious and undeserving like Ari!! I want Eli to be with someone else!! I am pissed this author created the MC in Ari that she did! destroyed the book!!

// “What in the hell is Shibari? Or do I even want to know?” Damn, at this point I didn’t care. On the cruise, I’d already half convinced myself that I was more than willing to give the BDSM kink a try if Eli was ever interested. Unless this Shibari shit was worse than the little bit of BDSM porn I’d watched over the years, I wanted to give it a try.”

~ This sums Ari up! He doesn’t deserve Eli!!!

// "This Shibari shit"?!!!? HOLY FUCK I WANT TO SMACK THE OBNOXIOUS RIGHT OUT OF ARI'S BODY, no matter how long it takes!!!
His complete disrespect for what other people love is absolutely enraging!! Is this author going out of her way to make Ari the most hateful and obnoxious character ever?!!? I hate him!!!

// I changed my mind ... Ari isn't a flawed character, he's a SHIT character >:-o!!! He is to blame for everything, as always, and he thinks HE deserves an apology?!!!? In what universe is he living?!!?

// Ari, you hacked into his codes?!!? I know your intent was for good and your meaning was very positive, but still, holy fuck is that an invasion of privacy!! As someone who hates when people keep tabs on him or become a bit invested in his life where he feels his people are elbowing into his private bubble, you'd think he wouldn't do it to someone else!! YOU'RE A WALKING DOUBLE STANDARD AND A FUCKING HYPOCRITE!!!!!

// WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!!? Okay now I am angry at the author too!! What the hell is she doing with this character?!!? How on earth is she even allowing Ari to treat Eli like that >:-o!!! Also, Ari has the gall and the absurdity to compare what HE did to what Eli felt was imperative to omit?!!? SERIOUSLY?!!? I am so pissed off right now I cannot explain it!! I also cannot stand Ari! He doesn't deserve Eli! NOPE!!

// It's like watching an expert interviewer [the author] interview a really obnoxious individual [Ari]! You can't blame the interviewer for how obnoxious the interviewee is!! So yeah, my disappointment has nothing to do with the writing! I just wish Ari were more likeable because at this point I definitely do not think he deserves Eli!!! Not at all!!

// And the way he scoffs at and disrespects other peoples' relationships, especially his best friends!! No wonder Ari has no friends, he's fucking judgemental as hell, and he's an obnoxious immature brat >:-o!!!!

// Also, it irritates me that Ari is so sensitive to what other people say about him. yet he doesn't think twice about what he says to or about other people!! Again, the book as a whole and the writing are SUPERB, but Ari is just not a person I like at the moment! It has nothing to do with the book, but since Ari is the way he is and it's HIS story, I'm having trouble being sympathetic to him!! I just dislike him!!