Nikki Bailey’s Reviews > Age of Eve: Return of the Nephilim > Status Update

God I hope this almost over. Painful to read. In one paragraph alone, this author uses 5 different words to describe one thing. Ugh! And an entire paragraph to describe a burlap sack? Really?

Not sure what to think of this story. So far the premise is good but the execution is horrible. The author spends more time making comparisons in the "prose" and describing things in too great of detail. Put it this way, it's so descriptive of the New Orleans landscape that I find myself searching the Internet for vacation packages more than reading and following the story.

So far, 2 chapters in, and all I can say is WTF!? I have no clue really what's going on. This author fills every paragraph with way too many metaphors and similes. Enough descriptions already. Hope this gets better because so far it's a confusing read.