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Giselle
is 88% done
“I forget who I speak with.”
This is why I can’t take this speech seriously. Sometimes it’ll be quite modern or they’ll all of a sudden be really formal. Then the grammar isn’t even correct; she’s the object in this sentence so it should be:
“I forget to/with whom I speak.”
For Christ’s sake if you’re going to be pretentious at least do it right.
— Jun 20, 2019 04:43PM
This is why I can’t take this speech seriously. Sometimes it’ll be quite modern or they’ll all of a sudden be really formal. Then the grammar isn’t even correct; she’s the object in this sentence so it should be:
“I forget to/with whom I speak.”
For Christ’s sake if you’re going to be pretentious at least do it right.
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Giselle’s Previous Updates
Giselle
is 91% done
“There’s far too many meanings for me to guess what you mean”
There are far too many...
— Jun 20, 2019 04:55PM
There are far too many...
Giselle
is 91% done
“She paused, waited for him to catch his breath, then notched him at her opening.”
Seriously?! No foreplay?! I hate these things
— Jun 20, 2019 04:53PM
Seriously?! No foreplay?! I hate these things
Giselle
is 90% done
“Good. Perhaps any other woman who dares touch you will think twice.”
This was utterly pointless; they won’t really be able to differentiate this bit of crystal from any of the others, seeing as when he is cut he doesn’t really bleed so much as grow more crystal. Or did Hamm forget that?
— Jun 20, 2019 04:52PM
This was utterly pointless; they won’t really be able to differentiate this bit of crystal from any of the others, seeing as when he is cut he doesn’t really bleed so much as grow more crystal. Or did Hamm forget that?
Giselle
is 89% done
“He lifted her into his arms as if she weighed nothing. Sorcha had seen him swing a sword taller than her, perhaps she felt like a feather to him.”
This is at least the second time she’s saying this; get over it.
— Jun 20, 2019 04:49PM
This is at least the second time she’s saying this; get over it.
Giselle
is 89% done
“Every fiber of her being yearned for him to touch her.”
Really? Because I just lost any interest I might’ve had with his bull-headedness and the argument. Honestly, she hasn’t even had naked time with him yet and already he’s saying she’s his. I know a guy like this and it irritates me every time he gets delusional like this.
— Jun 20, 2019 04:48PM
Really? Because I just lost any interest I might’ve had with his bull-headedness and the argument. Honestly, she hasn’t even had naked time with him yet and already he’s saying she’s his. I know a guy like this and it irritates me every time he gets delusional like this.
Giselle
is 89% done
“Every fiber of her being yearned for him to touch her.”
Really? Because I just lost any interest I might’ve had with his bull-headedness and the argument. Honestly, she hasn’t even had naked time with him yet and already he’s saying she’s his. I know a guy like this and it irritates me every time he gets delusional like this.
— Jun 20, 2019 04:47PM
Really? Because I just lost any interest I might’ve had with his bull-headedness and the argument. Honestly, she hasn’t even had naked time with him yet and already he’s saying she’s his. I know a guy like this and it irritates me every time he gets delusional like this.
Giselle
is 89% done
“There is no going back from this Sorcha. If you make this choice, I cannot stop.”
That’s not rapey at all...
— Jun 20, 2019 04:45PM
That’s not rapey at all...
Giselle
is 89% done
“She couldn’t tell Stone—Eamonn, she reminded herself—that she’d met his twin. She refused to issue a warning she wasn’t certain held any weight.”
Moron.
— Jun 20, 2019 04:39PM
Moron.
Giselle
is 87% done
“Although this night felt as though they found each other for the very first time, tomorrow was uncertain.”
Same overly romantic language.
— Jun 20, 2019 04:38PM
Same overly romantic language.
Giselle
is 87% done
“Their hearts beat as one. Samhain had never been celebrated by such a strong family of people.”
This language just seems fanciful and overly romantic; I can’t take it seriously.
— Jun 20, 2019 04:36PM
This language just seems fanciful and overly romantic; I can’t take it seriously.
