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For heaven’s sake. Yes, the hero is sad. Depressed. Suicidal. Grieving. I don’t think it needs to be repeated every other paragraph. Lord have mercy. How tedious this is. The prose and the dialogue do not come natural. Very wordy.
— Jun 28, 2019 01:38AM
