Toni’s Reviews > A SEAL Never Quits > Status Update
Toni
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Concerning the romance in this, I think the author is just trying too hard. We already know what will happen. It is just a matter of when.
— Jul 11, 2019 10:13AM
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Toni
is 12% done
I wish some authors wouldn't employ the cliched romantic moves. For example, before we are past page two there have already been loin stirrings and sensations of electric shock. I mean, really? Can we just let the story speak for itself? Plus, by this point all the suspense has left the building since the bad guy already mentally outed himself to us. Ugh!
— Jul 11, 2019 06:50AM