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Finished reading 'The Heart Cantrip' , 5th story in the book. This story wasn't bad and a hell of a lot better written than the 1st story but isn't a favorite though. It had a lot of supernatural characters and lots of erotic heat and one steamy scene. But just no heart. Nothing to tug the heart strings to scream romance. Next story is 'Eternal Heart' and I hope there will be heart to go with the heat.

Finished the novella 'The Hellhound Legion'. This novella is part of a book series I never heard of and now I'm intrigued. I may have to give the 'Kit Davenport series' a try.

The story was an interesting supernatural romance story with a very steamy 3some scene. This unusual story has Kit married to 6 supernatural males and she's a leader of the supernatural world. Good story but too short and cliffhanger ending.

I just finished the 3rd story, Deep Blue Sea. While the first two stories had a romance element to their tales this book didn't. It was more of a story of a young of awakening and realization of two beings true self and their willingness to risk all for one and other on principle.

The story was well written and very enjoyable. I rooted for both the protagonist and the antagonist. Good ending too.

I finished reading "A Demon's Plaything", the 2nd story in the anthology, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The story was well written and I was totally invested in the romantic couple, Asrian and Lilith. This fantasy story is set in a Fae world with royal hierarchies battling each other within the realm. There were moments of heartache, betrayal, passion, ebb & flow romance, and a strong female lead.

Started on the 2nd story in the anthology called "A Deomon's Plaything". I'm now in the 2nd chapter of the story so far is really good. Great improvement from the 1st story's mess.

I finished reading the first story in the anthology, "How to Capture a Demon's Heart", and it was a hot mess. The storytelling was pedestrian and riddled with grammatical errors that gave me a headache. Not to mention nonsensical sentences due to adding unnecessary extra words or failing to add conjugation words.

It is a wonder that this story was reviewed by so many on Amazon as good when it was a train wreck.

I've just finished the 5th chapter in the 1st book "How to Capture A Demon's Heart" by Knox & Miers. Although I'm liking the story so far I'm having trouble with ALL the grammatical errors. Every time I come upon a sentence with a misused punctuation or a sentence missing a conjunction word or a sentence w/a misplaced conjunction word added that shouldn't be there.... all these errors pulls me out of the story. Sigh!