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is 20% done
*sigh* Damn this needs a decent proofreader! So many missing words.... yes, small words such as.... as, in, the, at.... though they are small words they are necessary in order to write proper sentences and without them readers get pulled right out of the story. SMH... Wasted my money.
— Jul 29, 2019 05:46AM
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