Mel (Epic Reading)’s Reviews > Riwenne & the Mechanical Beasts > Status Update
Mel (Epic Reading)
is 23% done
This book has 7% more of my time before I just can’t anymore... dozens and dozens of issues, awkward sentences, continuity and description problems. So disappointing.
— Jul 31, 2019 11:03PM
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Mel (Epic Reading)
is 30% done
I could finish this fairly quickly but then I’d have to face a couple hundred pages of really poorly chosen words, grammatical errors, ridiculous dialogue and massive plot holes.
No thanks.
DNF @ 30%
— Aug 01, 2019 11:45AM
No thanks.
DNF @ 30%
Mel (Epic Reading)
is 8% done
Oh dear... in the opening chapter alone I have many issues:
- undefined words (ie: you can’t use ‘ordinary’ without a description in a fantasy world)
- contradictory phrases (ie: “burned with heat”)
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— Jul 30, 2019 04:20PM
- undefined words (ie: you can’t use ‘ordinary’ without a description in a fantasy world)
- contradictory phrases (ie: “burned with heat”)
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