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But I stop-realizing, why to transport,
To the time that is flying

I am sorry to say this, but the author needs a crash course in hyphenated words. I now wonder if I am a glutton for punishment which is why I keep agreeing to read such books.

I have never seen a man
But I know they vary

....How is it possible for someone to NOT see a man? Ever?

We can never taste a part of HIS relish

It's like erotica for beginners...yay!

My wings were "flies" of their own

You know...either this shit is way above my league or we all know that wings and insects don't really go together. Which is it...hmmm

I am not be able to see
You every time I desire.
But these thoughts of yours
Do not go even when I desires.

....

And even if I‟m awake thinking about you,
I enjoy it,
love it
Because
I‟m feeling you.

This...does NOT sound right, right?

Your Circumvention is a
Reason to applaud.

I don't even know what this is

Jointure is possible,
After traveling that far.

I....

I asked perfumes to keep away
My fragrance is similar to your products.

Work is worship for no doubt,
And happiness lies in this route.
But dont get obsessed with the things around,
Nothing is important than the people you always surround.

Well...isn't this a gem