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But I stop-realizing, why to transport,
To the time that is flying

I am sorry to say this, but the author needs a crash course in hyphenated words. I now wonder if I am a glutton for punishment which is why I keep agreeing to read such books.

I have never seen a man
But I know they vary

....How is it possible for someone to NOT see a man? Ever?

We can never taste a part of HIS relish

It's like erotica for beginners...yay!

Letting me know that I can, expatiate, from me

We all love a good lesson in extended vocabulary, don't we?

My wings were "flies" of their own

You know...either this shit is way above my league or we all know that wings and insects don't really go together. Which is it...hmmm

"I not always bring the pain.
If I‟m breaking your heart today,
I‟ll be the one to mend it.
Just let me sweep away the floor."

"Powerless at times
Thou considered powerful by you.
All I can say is, lemme go
Because that‟s the only way
You to be free,
The pain will be lightened,
Marks may remain,
But I‟ll engage you on up-next
In my own way."

I think.....the author is confusing 'though' and 'thou'. Also...

"Joy with sun, thunder and rain-droop"/

Please tell me I am naive and that I don't know enough about language to know that "Rain-droop" is a thing that has been known to all since ages.

"A gender above a child!
Why a parent to be ever want?"

How am I the only one who's seeing what's wrong with this book and these sentences that I am quoting? Good lord above, why am I the one who's gotta be the "cruel reviewer" who shows the true picture to a freshly minted author about their book?

"He lost 'Her' in his lust,
Turning the love into rust."

"I remember, being haunted,
By your thoughts and crying.
But, I stop-realizing, why to transport,
To the time that is flying."

"I‟ve heard time flies,
That it rides on horse,
But this moment is pretending 'still',
This day is passing away with lose."

With Lose? Lose what? WHAT?

"Realise it what‟s awaited,
Don‟t stuck in general."

I am not be able to see
You every time I desire.
But these thoughts of yours
Do not go even when I desires.

....

And even if I‟m awake thinking about you,
I enjoy it,
love it
Because
I‟m feeling you.

This...does NOT sound right, right?

Your Circumvention is a
Reason to applaud.

I don't even know what this is

Jointure is possible,
After traveling that far.

I....

I asked perfumes to keep away
My fragrance is similar to your products.

So basically, one debut author rates 5 stars another debut author's book and they do the same for you. Just like on social media, like for like, follow for follow, and thus fudging up the ratings, yeah? Perfect setup!

"Dream not of some building,
Dream not of a sky.
If you dream,
Dream a little high."

Wow! Just wow!!!!

"No more reasons to frown again,
Enjoy it,
As life is a moving train"

Work is worship for no doubt,
And happiness lies in this route.
But dont get obsessed with the things around,
Nothing is important than the people you always surround.

Well...isn't this a gem

"I feel a little amused,
As I realise these thoughts
That linger on my mind
Keeps me close to you.
Even when you are far enough
To be touched, seen,
Heard or smelled"

By all that is holy...this 'poetry' is too poetic!

"Do not go even when I desires"

Oh yeah. This is going awesome!

"He moaned in help"

"My wings were "flies‟ of their own"