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Joseph
is 2% done
I reached Chapter 2, which my previous update was meant for the Introductory section as I reached Chapter 1. Chapter 1 is excellent with an intense tone and strong character POV. I could imagine what the character was feeling to the point it was frightening. The cliffhanger is an "on the edge of your seat" scene. Chapter 2 coming up next!
— Aug 25, 2019 05:32PM
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Joseph
is 2% done
Reached Chapter 2...The writing structure is choppy, a mix of complete sentences and fragments. The writing style and storytelling is truly brilliant that those errors don't matter. The writing pulled me in since the first paragraph and I had to catch my breath at the end of Chapter 1. I was there, I felt her emotions, I heard her thoughts, I saw her dad. It was truly brilliant. I'm anxious and eager for Chapter 2.
— Aug 11, 2019 09:20PM
Joseph
is 2% done
Reached Chapter 2...The writing structure is choppy, a mix of complete sentence and fragments. The writing style and storytelling is truly brilliant that those errors don't matter. The writing pulled me in since the first paragraph and I had to catch my breath at the end of Chapter 1. I was there, I felt her emotions, I heard her thoughts, I saw her dad. It was truly brilliant. I'm anxious and eager for Chapter 2.
— Aug 11, 2019 09:18PM
