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it’s fascinating how such a female author has ended up describing her female protagonist in a way that men who can’t write would’ve done. all she’s doing is getting into a car! why are you telling me now that her legs are waxed and golden? we already know that she’s got a tan! is her lack of leg hair and the exact shade of the skin on her leg about to become a plot point? you didn’t need to describe her legs!
— Aug 26, 2019 01:54AM
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El
is on page 48 of 358
and again with a male character, which shows that really it’s just bad writing. sarah, honey, people don’t tend to call their chests ‘muscled’ in their internal monologue unless they’re specifically thinking about their appearance. which in that scene he very much was not. i’m done for today
— Aug 26, 2019 01:58AM
