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S. Rutherford
is on page 132 of 216
I like the writing, but there are self-important details left out of the story that we have to supplement as we keep reading, which is wrong. The author needs to tell us when certain things are said between characters, or certain activities happen. We can't assume something like this happens.
Ie) he's talking to his mentor about his powers, and we discover AFTERWARD what was "mentioned" that we didn't read happen.
— Sep 05, 2019 12:30PM
Ie) he's talking to his mentor about his powers, and we discover AFTERWARD what was "mentioned" that we didn't read happen.
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S. Rutherford
is on page 182 of 216
Props to the author for knowing who Neal Peart is!
— Sep 13, 2019 12:45PM
S. Rutherford
is on page 160 of 216
This author seems to love using the dialogue tags. "Said so-so". The writing is starting to drop in excellence. It's pissing me off. There is a lot of greatness to the style of writing, namely the voice. I love how this author writes, but they're beating the same phrases and using them too much. It slows the reading process down.
— Sep 05, 2019 04:44PM