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Ivory
is on page 282 of 480
1. this would be a lot stronger if we got kifah and benyamin's perspectives too
2. the "dud" relationships seem to have been built up way too much, while the one we're meant to ship hasn't been built up enough at all
— Sep 11, 2019 09:29AM
2. the "dud" relationships seem to have been built up way too much, while the one we're meant to ship hasn't been built up enough at all
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Ivory
is on page 347 of 480
I still really would've liked perspectives from characters other that Nasir and Zafirah just to round out the story and balance things, but the revelation about Benyamin's backstory is really helping to finally flesh out the characters some more
— Sep 12, 2019 02:09AM
Ivory
is on page 228 of 480
The plot seems to be quite slow at the moment and I'm not super captivated by any of the characters yet, but there are still plenty of pages to go
— Sep 10, 2019 11:28AM
