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Really quite struggling to get through this. The grammar is not great. Supposedly it is translated, not sure which language, and the tenses are often mixed up, which makes the grammar almost tortuous.
Though the storyline isn't bad, it seems lacking. It is full of a lot of descriptive paragraphs that tend to bog down the story. It also seems to be filled with strange variations of words.