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is 86% done
Hm. Not sure what happened. Got sloppy and rushed all of a sudden. Like, I get it's the climax and all but it feels clunky and over the top. Like the pacing is no longer as smooth as it was. Like as if you turned the last three Harry Potter books into 15% of this book. Disappointed. Might not continue with this series.
— Sep 18, 2019 01:03AM
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A. Hall
is 69% done
What side is Lucien on? Seriously. Glad we finally have answers. Glad for Aspen and Isak. I love the complexity and flaws Aspen has. Very believable and I feel for her. Who is the emissary for the evil??? Who? What is Aspen's origins?
— Sep 17, 2019 07:37PM
A. Hall
is 49% done
A temporary truce, eh? How are they gonna determine a winner if they fall in love??? Is Lucien good or bad? I hope he's good. Prediction: Aspen is the one. 2nd less believable: someone is framing her. What is Xavier doing? Why???
— Sep 16, 2019 11:31PM
A. Hall
is 31% done
I love Aspen's adaptability and moxy! Things start heating up at the Mage Council! I like that it's like a scavenger hunt rather than simply a boring duel. Kinda feral-urban Harry Potter Tri-Wizard Tournament.
— Sep 16, 2019 07:30PM
A. Hall
is 22% done
This is so cute! I love it! Aspen is fiery and bold and fun to watch! Lucien is charmingly arrogant! And it's great how they're forced together in this ruse. I wonder if she'll actually win the Mage seat, lol!
— Sep 15, 2019 06:50PM
A. Hall
is 10% done
Very fun! Kind of superficial but quick paced and entertaining. Good emotional connection and intriguing world building.
— Sep 13, 2019 03:14AM
