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Lizzy Lessard
is on page 28 of 242
Over explaining. Author gives a fabulous description of this old woman and ruins it by saying "The woman's ratty appearance made it clear that she had lived a rough life on the streets.". Well, DUH.
— Feb 28, 2013 11:48AM
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Lizzy Lessard
is on page 184 of 242
Sophie is acting like a brat and everyone is coddling her. Makes me sick. The entire cast needs to drown in a bathtub. There isn't one redeeming character or characteristic part in this book.
— Feb 28, 2013 01:00PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 162 of 242
So the main plot is solved....why are there more pages?
— Feb 28, 2013 12:47PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 142 of 242
Reminds me of Breaking Dawn battle preparations and that's not a good thing.
— Feb 28, 2013 12:24PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 126 of 242
No condoms but Sophie is so powerful that she doesn't need it.
— Feb 28, 2013 12:22PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 124 of 242
Wait, I thought they had sex on page 86 and now she's acting like a virgin? So confused.
— Feb 28, 2013 12:20PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 116 of 242
The ultimate Mary Sue. Wow, I'm so in shock how Mary Sue Sophie is...never seen it this bad even in fanfiction.
— Feb 28, 2013 12:17PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 93 of 242
These marks are rare, but a half dozen characters also have them. Really? That's rare?
— Feb 28, 2013 12:11PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 86 of 242
So I was wrong. There is a sex scene...you know between two characters that have to be soulmates because they have known each other a couple days...and that's an eternity apparently.
— Feb 28, 2013 12:07PM
Lizzy Lessard
is on page 84 of 242
oh and at least the book is properly edited.
— Feb 28, 2013 12:04PM
