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So Hiro fell in love with Natsuo without planning to... I wondered why I like such stories in live action but not here, and I think I know why: The book tells me this, but does not show it. So it all comes out of nowhere and then I have to accept it. So yeah, Thai BL shows actually do that better. And now we have another story with different characters... I stop. This is not my thing.
— Sep 23, 2019 01:32AM
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It is pretty obvious where this "I will break up with you to get my revenge" will go, and so far it does manage to keep my interest. However I do wonder about two things:
1) Why does Natsuo have fangs?
2) Who came up with this "can't cook so his/her food is basically poisonous and s/he doesn't realize that?"
— Sep 23, 2019 12:13AM
1) Why does Natsuo have fangs?
2) Who came up with this "can't cook so his/her food is basically poisonous and s/he doesn't realize that?"
