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Loverture is 35% done
I'm surprised at how slowly this book is going. Unlike the last 3 books which kept my interest so thoroughly that I binged them all one after the other, my attention is wandering during this one. Too much internal monologue in the middle of "urgent" conversations and action scenes. Also, the MC is making some really stupid mistakes especially after all his intelligent reasoning and hard-earned caution previously.
Sep 25, 2019 10:20AM
The Twilight Obelisk (Mirror World)

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