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My October book, Heartwood Box, is written in first person. I know this because the girl who is speaking says her feelings and shares her thoughts. The book also says I, We, and Me.
Oct 10, 2019 10:14AM
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Oct 28, 2019 10:05AM
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DBenami
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In my book the antagonist is a mysterious corporation (lab) past the cities border. There goal is just a theory so far... but the main character is convinced they are responsible for the disappearance of people in the city. No one talked about this lab and no one questions it.
Oct 28, 2019 10:05AM
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DBenami
DBenami is on page 265 of 336
The author used a sense of urgency.
Oct 21, 2019 10:21AM
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DBenami
DBenami is on page 265 of 336
In my book, there was a moment of suspension when Eunsoo went missing. She was texting with Araceli and Eunsoo decided to come over even thought it was quite late. They never saw her again. When the main character, Araceli called Eunsoo’s mom to see what was taking so long, she was horrified to find out she wasn’t home. This was a very stressful scene because when they were on the phone no one knew where she was.
Oct 21, 2019 10:20AM
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DBenami
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Oct 10, 2019 10:12AM
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