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is 45% done
The only complaint I have is the weak language these characters use. I'm all for avoiding foul language whenever possible, but words like 'jeez' should never be used in fiction writing when dealing with a hijacking. Not even remotely believable dialog.
— Oct 13, 2019 10:07PM
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is 65% done
This one's not gonna get a lot of stars. Stress dialog just isn't his strong suit.
— Oct 14, 2019 08:51PM
