Joseph > Status Update

Reached Chapter 2/Rule #19, In Chapter 1/Rule #34…[Page 5] three few fluff words, two misused commas…[Page 6] six misused commas, one set of dialogue restructuring, five fluff words, one misused period…[Page 7/9] nine misused commas, one missing comma. Otherwise, engaging storytelling, light horror that reminds me of SAW. The errors don't take away from the writing so far. Interested in continuing.