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Not loving this one. Its very dryly written, more like reading a diary. "We sailed on a ship past places x, y,x, the ship looked like ___. We landed for a day in [city[. Then we moved on." Except more lengthy and descriptive and literally nothing happens. way too much telling. no showing.
Nov 03, 2019 04:30PM
The Assassins of Tamurin

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