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Still cute. Sometimes I get exhausted by it. It feels very small. Yet info dumps and repeats scenarios. How many times does Marguerite have to get mad at them all? How many times do ALL the cousins and siblings have to interrupt a moment? For all their talking, it doesn't feel like Greg and Liss have any chemistry or anything in common. He seems scientifically curious mostly. Kind of a "man-woman" basic attraction.
— Nov 04, 2019 07:53PM
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A. Hall
is on page 101 of 360
How delightfully cute! It suffers a little bit with an overabundance of characters - 6 cousins and 2 matriarchs + 2 main characters. And they all seem to need to be involved in every discussion and scene. Other than that, it's a really cute premise, titillating stuff, and everybody is likable yet flawed. Feels a bit hurried and sloppy but seems to go for the humor above the reason.
— Oct 31, 2019 07:06PM
