Kit Feral’s Reviews > Escape from Mr. Lemoncello's Library > Status Update
Kit Feral
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Everyone says stuff like "yo, whazzup" and "chya" and it's really throwing me off. My kingdom for some better dialogue...
— Nov 07, 2019 03:05AM
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Kit Feral
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I have the feeling I would have loved this as a kid but currently the not so great writing and super flat characters/bad dialogue is kinda putting a damper on it. But I've heard great things (... from a book character...) so I'll keep at it!
— Nov 04, 2019 02:52AM
