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Elithanathile
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// What's with authors not expanding their vocabularies in their books ... there is so much "screeching", Upton is sounding like a shrill harpy!!!
What about: yelled, shouted, exclaimed, said loudly, roared, etc. I means there are so many options!!
— Dec 03, 2019 05:40AM
What about: yelled, shouted, exclaimed, said loudly, roared, etc. I means there are so many options!!
Elithanathile
is 21% done
// Aside from a few niggles, I'm wiling to give this a chance! We shall see!
— Dec 03, 2019 05:26AM
Elithanathile
is 20% done
// What the fuck!!! This guy's hands are always "fluttering up to his face"!!!
Some authors have only one speed and one sub-genre as their specialty and I think this one needs to stick to hers!!! The books she usually writes are fantastic, but THIS is not a great example of great work!!! Had I not already liked this author's other series, I wouldn't give this author the time of day strictly based on THIS example!!
— Dec 03, 2019 05:25AM
Some authors have only one speed and one sub-genre as their specialty and I think this one needs to stick to hers!!! The books she usually writes are fantastic, but THIS is not a great example of great work!!! Had I not already liked this author's other series, I wouldn't give this author the time of day strictly based on THIS example!!
Elithanathile
is 19% done
// What's with some of the nonsense here >:-o?!!?
1. What's with all the hands "fluttering" around the face???
2. What's with all the screeching and giggling???
THIS AUTHOR IS MAKING UPTON SOUND LIKE A FUCKING AIRHEAD!
3. They JUST met and Upton already refers to Walsh as his friend??? Author, if anything, it should be: Upton turned to his NEW friend, not "friend"! IT MAKES AN IMPORTANT DIFFERENCE; YOU SHOULD KNOW!!
— Dec 03, 2019 05:20AM
1. What's with all the hands "fluttering" around the face???
2. What's with all the screeching and giggling???
THIS AUTHOR IS MAKING UPTON SOUND LIKE A FUCKING AIRHEAD!
3. They JUST met and Upton already refers to Walsh as his friend??? Author, if anything, it should be: Upton turned to his NEW friend, not "friend"! IT MAKES AN IMPORTANT DIFFERENCE; YOU SHOULD KNOW!!
Elithanathile
is 10% done
// A colorful sign near the gangway caught his eye. It read, Ship Happens. Walsh snorted. It was a clever play on the phrase, “shit happens.”
- This is irritating 😠!! Author, your readers aren’t idiots; we know a pun when we read it for fuck’s sake 😠😠😠!!
— Dec 03, 2019 04:29AM
- This is irritating 😠!! Author, your readers aren’t idiots; we know a pun when we read it for fuck’s sake 😠😠😠!!
