Joel’s Reviews > The Burning White > Status Update

He's not using dialogue or action to tell the story and it's boring character expositions trying to explain things rather than properly show it unfold. I'm no longer optimistic this is going to end well. Also, what started out as a very interesting magic system has now gone 4+ books and we still don't know fully how or why it works and this failure is burying the story. I fear deus ex machina coming.