John Walker’s Reviews > Ghost Wolf > Status Update

The Dinner scene was the next blatant form of Gary Stu character development. Its not bad to be modest, but if someone creates an opening like: "I heard So and So gave you a generous reward." True modesty would just be him replying "Why yes, he was quite generous with his offer." It was awkward that he continued by saying that he didn't accept the money so we then got the 'everyone was shocked' reaction.