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This book has been okay. I have gotten confused and list a couple of time with placement and location of the characters. I don't think it's been written very clearly. I live in Utah and grew up here and understand all the Mormon lingo. The conversations are really awkward and I feel like the author is trying to hard to add mystery to the book. It's not bad for a novel but it feels more like a rough draft
— Dec 25, 2019 08:35PM
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Rachel
is on page 98 of 278
This book has been okay. I have gotten confused and list a couple of time with placement and location of the characters. I don't think it's been written very clearly. I live in Utah and grew up here and understand all the Mormon lingo. The conversations are really awkward and I feel like the author is trying to hard to add mystery to the book. It's not bad for a novel but it feels more like a rough draft
— Dec 25, 2019 08:37PM
