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Kelster
is 75% done
I am beginning to enjoy the book more...slightly. There is more character interaction but I wish there was more reaction/response when something "dramatic" happens. I like a bit more drama in my books and instead of just saying that words sent a chill through the room or someone was frightened by something that happened perhaps show us how others are affected by what is happening.
— Mar 30, 2013 06:53AM
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Kelster
is 52% done
I am STRUGGLING. The story is good and if told better I would be all in but the book is written so passively that even the "action" scenes are bland. I mean the Others are awesome so nothing about them should be flat. There should be so much fierceness in this book so much fear and uncertainty.
Plus, the h is coming across as a can do no wrong, Pollyanna innocent. Not buying that all her "missteps" are endearing
— Mar 28, 2013 09:25AM
Plus, the h is coming across as a can do no wrong, Pollyanna innocent. Not buying that all her "missteps" are endearing
