William’s Reviews > The Moving Blade > Status Update
William
is 75% done
Very hard to keep pushing through this. The sections about the behaviour of Jamie are terrible. It's clear Pronko has no idea how young women think or behave.
— Jan 10, 2020 05:44PM
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William
is 35% done
First 1/3 Hiroshi is cowardly, pacing uneven.
Second 1/3. The stupidity of Hiroshi and the police is irritating.
— Dec 23, 2019 06:12PM
Second 1/3. The stupidity of Hiroshi and the police is irritating.
