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“Given that the brain was nothing but a loose sponge in a snow globe, his mental matter went haywire, banging around its hard bone home and rendering him senseless and off balance.”
-Any one piece of that is fine, great even. All of it in one sentence...again? Can we just say things straight for once?
— Jan 12, 2020 10:56PM
-Any one piece of that is fine, great even. All of it in one sentence...again? Can we just say things straight for once?
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Loralee
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Struggling a bit with the necessity of the ‘vocabulary lesson’ here. Awkward placement. Awkward choice for...what?... establishing his father’s personality? *shrug*
— Feb 02, 2020 07:10PM
