Michelle Shaw’s Reviews > Complete Intrepid Saga, The > Status Update

The big problem I’m having with this story is the pacing. There are enormous jumps of time which aren’t really reflected in the characters - it all gets waved away with “rejuvenation medicine”. The result is that the characters don’t grow or age in my reading imagination.

I get that this story is trying to cover a huge arc of time, but the jumps make it feel like a lot of small stories strung together.