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is 72% done
I'm bored - too much similar sex, unneccessary repeating emotional drama and a too stupid to live MC so far.
It really started good and the idea has potential but...well...and then there is this huuuuge plothole of the tracking spell. If Seth can use it, why doesn't the bad guy use it? I mean, they burn down Evan's house, they could have gotten something personal out of it beforehand. Don't know if I'll finish.
— Jan 26, 2020 07:04AM
It really started good and the idea has potential but...well...and then there is this huuuuge plothole of the tracking spell. If Seth can use it, why doesn't the bad guy use it? I mean, they burn down Evan's house, they could have gotten something personal out of it beforehand. Don't know if I'll finish.
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