Claire B **paused for now**’s Reviews > Runaway Omega > Status Update
Claire B **paused for now**
is 40% done
The characters in this book don’t talk to each other. They talk at each other. Break the dialogue up a bit with observations or actions. Otherwise it’s just a lot of rambling with sprinkles of exposition every once in a while. Tiring.
— Feb 18, 2020 08:07AM
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Claire B **paused for now**
is 99% done
Time for me and this author to call it a day.
*2 Stars*
— Feb 18, 2020 10:27AM
*2 Stars*
Claire B **paused for now**
is 98% done
I found the dialogue and characters all a bit silly and juvenile. And yes I do realise I’m saying that about an mpreg shifter book.
— Feb 18, 2020 10:26AM
