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is 25% done
Not bad so far. good exposition. Caught me back up to the characters quickly and launched into the new stuff.
— Apr 23, 2013 08:24AM
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is 95% done
Not bad. A little repetitive at times. She needs to trust that her readers get a point the first time she says it. Be a bit more subtle.
— Apr 25, 2013 09:54AM
