Nemo’s Reviews > Undertow > Status Update

It's really tempting to quit reading this. It's awful in so many ways. But I signed up to review it for someone, so I'll keep at it a bit longer. I mean, this far in and the actual plot hasn't even started yet. Where is the plot? I'm losing the will to live.

This isn't really pulling me in, I have to admit, but I'll give it another chapter or two before deciding whether it's worth carrying on with. The plot sounds intriguing, should it ever happen, but there's massive info dumps and inane over-descriptions of literally everything, plus commas in all the wrong places and missing in the right places. It's all distracting from the actual story, which is slow to happen.