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Kara Laufeyson
is on page 62 of 235
I’m liking most the first part of the story so far. It has a way drawing me in. I like generally like a Madison so far and I admire her morals and her loyalty to her mother’s wedding business. Roman is sexy as sin, I like his character and his stubbornness, but I don’t agree with some of his decisions so far. The author’s wording is a bit strange in places and I have to re-read some sentences.
— Feb 19, 2020 07:16PM
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Kara Laufeyson
is on page 141 of 235
It’s becoming a slow read, Madison’s character is beginning to annoy me. In my view, she started out as a strong character but has been making choices and then trying to back out of the decisions she has made. I’m hoping to finish the book but it’s looking like a DNF if Madison’s character remains the same.
— Feb 23, 2020 06:42PM
Kara Laufeyson
is on page 91 of 235
I’ve run a few sentences that don’t sound quite right and takes away from the reading a little. The transitions from place to place are non-existent and sometimes it’s alright, and other times it’s confusing. But I read an amusing scene featuring Arlo and I couldn’t but to laugh. Poor baffled mobster!
— Feb 20, 2020 07:24PM
