Lillian Francis’s Reviews > I've Got This > Status Update
Lillian Francis
is 57% done
A 6 week time jump, when we'd already not really seen a developing relationship but only been told about it, isn't really helping the lack of connection I'm feeling between these two.
— Mar 01, 2020 04:16AM
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Lillian Francis
is 74% done
And this story has officially flown into lalaland territory.
— Mar 01, 2020 05:58AM
Lillian Francis
is 69% done
That scene. That's the sort of thing I wanted all the way through.
I think it's the writing style and tense, it's chatty and encourages telling rather than showing.
— Mar 01, 2020 05:52AM
I think it's the writing style and tense, it's chatty and encourages telling rather than showing.
Lillian Francis
is 35% done
This is a slog.
There's no chemistry between the MCs and so far this reads more like a story about the day to day running of a theme park than a romance.
— Mar 01, 2020 01:47AM
There's no chemistry between the MCs and so far this reads more like a story about the day to day running of a theme park than a romance.
