Status Updates From I've Got This (Joy Universe...

And this story has officially flown into lalaland territory.

That scene. That's the sort of thing I wanted all the way through.
I think it's the writing style and tense, it's chatty and encourages telling rather than showing.

A 6 week time jump, when we'd already not really seen a developing relationship but only been told about it, isn't really helping the lack of connection I'm feeling between these two.

This is a slog.
There's no chemistry between the MCs and so far this reads more like a story about the day to day running of a theme park than a romance.

It’s not until I turn toward the direction signpost to orient myself that I realize. Oh, crap. I’m living out a sappy rom-com. ~Trav