Katia M. Davis’s Reviews > Saving Sam > Status Update
Katia M. Davis
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I'm struggling a bit with this at the moment. The writing style is repetitive and doesn't sit right - I'm in an 8 year old kid's head and the narrative refers to their mother as Jane? I'm not in the kid's head anymore. It's also kind of long winded. We've only just got to the point of all the lead up. Hope it gets better from here.
— Mar 09, 2020 02:28AM
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